起点小说《黎明之剑》webnovel书评 4.44分/5分

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正文翻译

During Gawain transmigration, a little problem occurs.
After hovering in the sky above the land of a strange world for over hundreds of thousands of years, he realizes that perhaps his transmigration is completed by acquiring a physical body.
Never did he imagine that he would have to guide the body out of a coffin after going through great difficulties to obtain it, only to come face-to-face with his two extremely shocked great-great-great-great... great-granddaughters, and also—
Be thrust into a world that's the verge of its era’s end.

高文穿越了，但穿越的时候稍微出了点问题。在某个异界大陆上空飘了十几万年之后，他觉得自己可能需要一具身体才算是成为一个完整的穿越者，但他并没想到自己好不容易成功之后竟然还需要带着这具身体从棺材里爬出来，并且面对两个吓蒙了的曾曾曾曾……曾孙女。以及一个即将迎来纪元终结的世界。

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burntpotato 5星

FINALLY HERE!!! I'm gonna copy paste someone's review from NU @c600. By:criticalmind

终于到了！！！我要从 NU @c600 复制粘贴某人的评论。作者：批判性思维

An awesome novel. It's a kingdom building novel where the MC becoes a duke and starts reforming his territory with universal education, science and abolishing slavery etc. At the same time, he's fighting against evil cults, the church, various nobles and preparing for armageddon. It reminds me quite a bit of Release that witch except for the lack of romance and the fact that most of the rules of science are not the same and have to be rediscovered.

很赞的小说。这是一部王国建设小说，主角成为公爵，开始通过普及教育、科学和废除奴隶制等方式改革他的领土。同时，他正在与邪教、教会、各种贵族作斗争，并为世界末日做准备。它让我想起了放开那个女巫，除了缺乏爱情故事以及大多数科学规则与现实都不相同必须重新探索。

The MC is likeable, actually uses whatever knowledge he has. He's not completely OP and depends on a large number of people. He uses his brain far more often than his predecessor's supposedly legendary strength.

主角很讨人喜欢，实际上使用了他所拥有的任何知识。他不完全是OP，依赖很多人。他比他的前任传说中的力量更频繁地使用他的大脑。
原创翻译：龙腾网 http://www.ltaaa.cn 转载请注明出处

The other characters are memorable and well developed. There are a few 'genius' characters who turn his ideas into reality and even improve upon them quite a bit. The antagonists are quite smart. Their actions are more or less logical and they actually win some of the time.

其他角色令人难忘且发展良好。有一些“天才”人物将他的想法变为现实，甚至在他们身上进行了相当多的改进。对手很聪明。他们的行为或多或少是合乎逻辑的，他们实际上有时会赢。

TL;DR An awesome, must read, kingdom building, tech building, political and action novel with a lot happening and a well written cast of characters.

简而言之：一本很棒的必读的王国建设、科技建设、政治和动作小说，其中发生了很多事情，而且角色写得很好。
Zafarak55 5星

Finally!!! the top novel that can be treated the same as RTW and Lord of the Mysteries. This novel is slow in the beginning but the story is incredibly intriguing and picks up the pace after 30-40 chaps. i even braved the risk and read in MTL and the story is simply fantastic. a mix of Politics, kingdom building and Mystery. Along for the ride are Dragons,Elfs, and sirens.So steel yourself and begin your journey, youll never regret it.

最后！！！可以与放开那个女巫RTW和诡秘之主同等对待的顶级小说。这本小说一开始很慢，但故事非常有趣，在 30-40 章后加快了步伐。我甚至冒着风险读了 MTL，这个故事简直太棒了。政治、王国建设和神秘的混合体。随行的是龙、精灵和警报器。所以鼓起勇气，开始你的旅程，你永远不会后悔。

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Boomshakalaka007 5星

Finally, finally, finally.... Can't wait for this get picked up.... I hope you can also translate xiling empire, as it is where it all starts :)

终于，终于，终于....等不及这个被捡起来了....我希望你也能翻译希灵帝国，因为它是一切的开始:)
TYErannical 2星

I don't understand the point of making him a transmigrated hero, who before transmitting fully had to spend hundreds of thousands of years observing the world, if your going to make his past knowledge completely useless. He has proven to be unreliable and useless when it came to any type of information throughout the entirety of the chapters I read.

我不明白让他成为穿越英雄的意义，他在穿越之前必须花费数十万年的时间观察世界，如果你要让他的过去知识完全无用。在我阅读的所有章节中，当涉及到任何类型的信息时，这十万年都是无用的。
原创翻译：龙腾网 http://www.ltaaa.cn 转载请注明出处

The main character, having past acclamations as being a world observing hundreds of thousands year old entity, as well as an accomplished hero, is written in a way that makes him feel ordinary and not special in any regards.

主角，作为一个世界观察数十万年的实体，以及一个有成就的英雄，在过去的赞誉中被写成一种让他在任何方面都感觉没有特色。

The story is written in such a way that it brings no emotions from the reader. I can't exactly pin point the exact reasons why, but I have managed to get a basic generalization an this is. First, the bland descxtions of actions,places, and things. Serves to make the story take a very one note plot.

故事的写作方式不会引起读者的任何情感。我不能准确指出确切的原因，但我已经设法得到一个基本的概括，这就是。首先，对动作、地点和事物的平淡描述。这让故事情节非常单一。

Secondly, the lack of character descxtions when it comes to the characters emotions and actions makes the story even more monotonous. Couple this reason with the first then you've got a very bland story that doesn't manifest any good emotions when reading it.

其次，在人物情感和动作方面缺乏人物描述，使故事更加单调。将这个原因与第一个原因结合起来，您就会得到一个非常平淡的故事，在阅读时不会带来任何积极情绪。

Oh and I read the first 60 chapters not just 15 like it says.

哦，我读了前 60 章，而不是像它说的那样只读了 15 章。
sixerninerfives 1星

The pace is so slow that it quickly become extremely boring, I dropped after 8 chapters of them talking and descxtions, there was 1 fight and the point of that fight was just to make tje characters TALK EVEN MORE

节奏太慢了，很快就变得非常无聊，在他们的谈话和描述8章后我就放弃了。有1场战斗，那场战斗的目的只是为了让角色说更多话。
EsliEsma 4星

It's a wonderful read. The first two chapters threw me off making me think here we go again a harem, but I was pleasantly surprised. There is a bit of everything and the premise is refreshing. Hello ancestor.

这是一本很棒的书。前两章让我觉得我们又来了一个后宫，但我很惊喜。前提是令人耳目一新。祖宗你好。（译者注主角穿越成了小说里主要角色的祖宗）
arbiter 3星

High expectations because of top reviews here but... sigh..

由于这里的高分评论而寄予厚望，但是......叹息......

For me, its just average, in bad terms, its lame :/

对我来说，它只是平均水平，用不好的话来说，它是蹩脚的：/

I was expecting a somewhat op but not overly op, just strong to stronger genre, cause you know, an ancestor, strongest hero/warrior, first pioneer, blablabla, he even was a somewhat like a soul in the sky watching everything formed, but nothing note-worthy advantage, it was like useless, i dont even know why the author introduced him like that. His personality is cringe for me, i was expecting a somewhat like Overlord vibes, but meh its so far from that.

我期待一个有点操作但不是过度操作，只是从强到强的类型，因为你知道，一个祖先，最强的英雄/战士，第一先驱，blablabla，他甚至有点像天空中的灵魂，看着一切形成，但是没有什么值得一提的特别优点，我什至不知道作者为什么要这样介绍他。他的性格让我感到畏缩，我期待着有点像霸王的感觉，但离那还差得很远。

Ofcourse i didnt really read everything, well because its locked starting chapter 40, didn't want to continue cause its boring for me, mostly because already 39 chapters but still didnt hooked me, but maybe, perhaps that later on it'll hit my spot if i continued and everything i questioned so far is explained, but i don't wanna waste coins and pass if im not sure.

当然我并没有真正阅读所有内容，因为它锁定了第40章，不想继续让我感到无聊，主要是因为已经39章但仍然没有吸引我，但也许，也许以后它会击中我的。如果我继续并且解锁所有内容，但我不想浪费硬币。

I rarely leave bad reviews to a novel, i usually support everything because i understood them, especially those novels from originals, but because of too high expectations from the top reviews gave me, i'll be just honest with my review.

我很少给小说留下差评，我通常支持一切，因为我理解它们，尤其是那些原创小说，但由于高分评论对我的期望太高，我会诚实地评论我的评论。

Well i understand that everyone has different taste, it just disappointed me, first with reviews, and second with what i read from early chapters, i really thought that there will be an Overlord vibes with the way i read it, some famous strong ancestor take over, some benefits and advantages with his state from the beginning, but nothing like that so far, he even struggled at the beginning fighting some mobs(supposedly), in my words, i dont like a grand opening but lame performance.

嗯，我知道每个人的口味都不一样，只是让我失望，首先是评论，其次是我从前几章读到的内容，我真的以为我读它的方式会有一种霸王的感觉，他的状态从一开始就有一些优势，但到目前为止没有什么爽点，他甚至在开始时与一些小怪战斗的有来有回，用我的话来说，我不喜欢这个开场，感觉很蹩脚。
Shadowles_Immortal 4星

First of all if you hate slow novels this ain't for you like seriously am at chapter 60 and their honest hasn't been nothing exciting about it but this is how slow novels are they build up a good world with good character and from their slowly build up the excitement. So hopefully this kicks up after say most slow novels do in about the 100 chapter.

首先，如果您讨厌慢热小说，坦诚的说在前 60 章确实没有什么令人兴奋的。但这就是慢热小说建立一个具有良好品格的好世界的描写方式。这类小说逐渐建立起兴奋感。因此大多数慢热小说在大约 100 章之后这种情况会有所改善。
FedEx 5星
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The world building is realistic & logical. After 50 chapters, there is still no stereotypical trope of using modern knowledge to make glass/ gun/cement to speed up civilization nonsense. The MC understands that he has to use this world knowledge of magic with modern society ideology of social structure to build his kingdom.

世界观是现实和合乎逻辑的。 50章之后，仍然没有刻板的比喻，用现代知识制造玻璃/枪/水泥来加速文明这类胡说八道。主角明白他必须利用这个世界的魔法知识和现代社会的社会结构意识形态来建立他的王国。
NagaKarat 4星

This is surprisingly a good read, the protaganist is intelligent and crafty. He use his brains more than his brawn. It has interesting side character as well. I hope this book get sexted because I really wants to know what happens next.

这是一本令人惊讶的好书，主角聪明而狡猾。他比他的肌肉更多地使用他的大脑。它也有有趣的边缘特征。我希望这本书能被选中（免费），因为我真的很想知道接下来会发生什么。
Tyrannical_Book 5星

it was truly gem among gem sad everyone dropping bcuz of story slow pace sigh.

这真是宝石中的宝石，每个人都因故事缓慢而叹息和放弃。
Sleeping_Racoon 4星

A quite enjoyable kingdom building story so far. The beginning is slow, and so far it's about building/talking stuffs, There's not much of a fight, so if you're looking for action, looks elsewhere. Can't say much about the characters other than the mc and one of the side chars, as they still lack developments.

到目前为止，一个非常有趣的王国建设故事。开始很慢，它是关于王国构建的内容，没有太多的战斗，所以如果你正在寻找动作小说，请看别的小说吧。除了主角和一个配角之外的其他角色的描写不多，因为他们仍然缺乏展开。

The mc himself is somewhat good. Logical most of the times, but careless sometimes (when first adapting to his new body and regarding stuffs related to his secrets). Other than his carelessness, he is good at trying to adapt to this new world. Trying to understand the world's rules and work with them, instead of just using modern knowledge as if the world is the same one.

主角本人还不错。大多数时候合乎逻辑，但有时粗心（当第一次适应他的新身体并考虑与他的秘密有关的事情时）。除了粗心之外，他还善于尝试适应这个新世界。试图理解世界的规则并与之合作，而不是仅仅使用现代知识，就好像世界是同一个世界一样。

While one of the side character is annoying for me. Like other reviewer said, she is a chatterbox. She is also more "developed" than the mc's descendants, as it seems she would be used more in the plot with her mysterious background, and interact more with him than his own descendants.

虽然其中一个配角对我来说很烦人。就像其他评论者说的，她是个话匣子。她也比主角的后代更“发达”，似乎她会在剧情中更多地使用她的神秘背景，与他的互动比他自己的后代更多。

The world building is not that bad, you got politics, multiple races, studying magic, divine power and gods, as well as alien? (Connection to the author's other novel?).
Good potential, I'd say.

世界建设还不错，你有政治，多种族，学魔法，神通神灵，还有外星人？（与作者另一部小说的联系？）。
很有潜力，我会说。
HighMaintenance 5星

Kingdom Building novel ohh yeahhh! Please pick up this novel it was great novel im so excited about the story development. And i got the vibe from RTW hehehe

王国建设小说哦耶！请拿起这本小说，这是一部很棒的小说，我对故事的发展感到非常兴奋。我从放开那个女巫RTW 那里得到了氛围，呵呵

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