《完美世界》-外网书评

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网友：一个无良的喜剧派主角，他始终忠于自己的目标和他的伙伴，同时锻造出自己的卓越道路，陪衬的配角促使主角的力量不断强大。最初的原始之地的“天才们”真的与主角一直保持联系......

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Matt_of_the_Mint
One of the best novels out there. Lots of comedy especially in the first 500 chapters when the protagonist is still a child. Sometimes I laughed so hard it hurt. Has also lots of drama and tragedy and makes you feel the pain the protagonist goes through. One of my personal highlights are the fighting scenes, the descxtion and action is so exciting that it reminds me of the old dragon ball days where you could not stop grinning and clenching your fists. Overall I would say a true gem. Plus I like the jokes the translator puts in occasionally at the end of some chapters.

我看过的最好的小说之一。其中有很多喜剧情节，尤其是在前500章，当主角还是个孩子的时候，有时让我笑得肚子疼。它里面也有很多故事和悲剧，让你感受到主人公经历的痛苦。我个人认为的一个亮点是武打场面，它的描述和动作是如此令人兴奋，它让我想起了古老的龙珠时代，你不能停止微笑和紧握你的拳头。总的来说，我认为这是一颗真正的宝石。另外，我喜欢翻译者偶尔在某些章节末尾讲的笑话。

Taima
my favorite novel so far
Mc isn''t kind or bullshit like the most "normal" novels here our mc is short tempered and shameless as fuck. I love how he doesn''t even give a fuck about elders if they don''t have good intentions.
the comedy is gold it was great reading him tease the genious "beaties" when he was still a child it, some jokes made me keep smiling all day.
there is some mystery mixed in that is answered slowly and it''s almost like the author never forgets anything.
only bad thing would be that he only lost his V-Club subscxtion at ep 900+ (yes, i bookmarked that chapter)
overall this shit is golden.

到目前为止我最喜欢的小说。
主角不像大多数“正常”小说那样善良的匪夷所思，我们的主角是暴躁且无耻的。我喜欢他对那些没有良好意愿的老人的漠不关心。
它里面的喜剧情节是金子般的亮点，它是伟大的小说。当主角还是一个孩子时，他戏弄天才“披头士”，其中的一些笑话能使我保持微笑一整天。
书中有一些神秘的东西，它们慢慢地将得到了解答，作者好像从来没有忘记过什么。
唯一糟糕的是，它在900章以上的时候失去了他的VIP俱乐部订阅(是的，我把那一章标记为书签)
总的来说，这狗屎是金色的。(这是一个音乐专辑的名称，但我不懂什么含义，只有直译了)

lionhard
One of my favorites to read daily. Light hearted but also really serious when it calls for it.
The best thing about this novel is its cultivation progression. Shi Hao doesn''t simply follow the layed out parts, he tries his own stuff and improves the different levels as he can. ANd the best about it: this isn''t just an MC thing, everybody does this to a point. Therefore his later enemys don''t seem like old people 3 lvls above him or caricatures of older ones, they are powerfull and suspension stays throughout the novel.
Has a lot of mysteries, and I mean a lot for endgame stuff.
Pika and Sovereignzane have solid quality at the moment and present a enjoyable reading expirience.

这是我每天最喜欢读的书之一。轻松诙谐，但有时又真的很严肃，当它需要的时候。
这部小说最好的地方在于它的修行过程。石昊并不是简单地按照修炼的常规步骤去做，他会尝试自己的东西，尽可能地提高不同的境界。最棒的是: 这不仅仅是一个主角的事情，每个人都有自己的一个目标。因此，他后来的敌人看起来并不像比他高出3个境界的老者，也不像漫画中的老者，他们很有力量，整部小说都是反着来的。
小说中有很多谜团，我的意思是有很多结尾时需要处理的东西。

Thuumin
I hate to vote this down because I really want to like the book. I read over 1600 chapters, but finally I had to give up. Honestly, I only read that long because I wanted to see a resolution to some of the hanging plot points. As another review noted, the author seems to have intended some revelations that he has been teasing essentially from the beginning of the series. But it''s always a tease, with very little pay off in the end. One of the major revelations he did finally get to, after over 1000 chapters of occasionally talking about it was so anti-climactic, I wanted to quit right then.
Early on, the book is great. It has a different cultivation system than any other light novel I''ve read. The main character starts with a mystery, and it develops well. The early and mid revelations are great. There''s humor, action, adventure, great descxtions, fun world building, everything that would get the novel high praise. But it suffers from needless repetition, battles that are reminiscent of DBZ in length, and the normal foibles of these novels such as the author seemingly forgetting some threads.
By the end, before I quit reading, I''d open a chapter, see it was a fight and jump 3 chapters to see if it was resolved yet. In doing this I went back to check once, and I missed no story development at all. Literally all that happened was multiple chapters describing the moves and attacks of the parties in question. It just got too boring.

我不想投票否决这本书，因为我真的很喜欢这本书。我读了1600多章，但最后还是不得不放弃。坦白地说，我只读了那么长，因为我想看到一些悬而未决的情节的解决方案。正如另一篇评论所指出的，作者似乎有意揭露一些他从一开始就一直在构建的谜团。但这总是一个玩笑，最后几乎什么也没有揭露（很多坑都没有填）。最终得到的一个重要启示是，在花了1000多章的时间偶尔地谈论它是如此的反高潮，我当时就想放弃了。
一开始，这本书很棒。它的修炼体系与我读过的其他修真小说都不一样。主角从一个神秘故事开始，故事发展得很好。早期和中期的描写是伟大的。幽默、动作、冒险、精彩的描述、有趣的世界构建，所有这些都能让这部小说获得高度评价。但它制造了不必要的重复、让人想起龙珠超那样长时间的战斗，以及这些小说常见的缺点，比如作者似乎忘记了他以前挖的一些坑。
到最后，在我停止阅读之前，我会打开一章，看到这是一场战斗开始了，然后跳过三章，再看看它是否已经结束了。在此过程中，我回头检查了一次，并没有遗漏任何故事的发展。实际上，所发生的一切都是用多个章节描述了相关各方的行动和攻击。这太无聊了。

Ninety-Nine Alligator
Well then weary traveler, you have stumbled upon this Xianxia tale and subsequently this review surely worried if this novel will hurt you like the others.
Simply put no. Right off the bat, this novel''s world building is top tier. It''s one of the best out there. Characters you love, hate and love to hate all explore and struggle in a brutal cultivation world. You weary traveler get to partake in the journey of one little boy as he grows older and carves out his own piece with ever growing steaks. Laugh at his antics, cry at the unfairness, and finally have your face contort in the famous ''does not know whether to laugh or cry''.
There is only one downside, this is a novel suited for binging. When it hits a slump, it hits hard. However, all journeys have tribulations. Stockpile your energy and batter that barrier. It truly is worth it.

那么，疲惫的旅行者，你偶然发现了这个仙侠的故事，随后肯定会担心这本小说是否会像其他小说一样伤害你。
简单地说不会。从一开始，这部小说的世界观建设就是一流的。这是最好的世界观之一。你爱的，恨的，从爱到恨的角色都在残酷的修真世界中探索和斗争。你这样疲惫的旅行者将参与到一个小男孩的旅程中，当他长大后，用不断增强力量创出属于他自己的一方天地。你会笑他的滑稽表现，哭他受到的不公平的对待，最后有你的面部表情将扭曲成著名的“不知笑还是哭”。
只有一个缺点，这是一部适合暴饮暴食的小说。当它陷入衰退时，你就会遭受重创。然而，所有的旅程都有苦难。储存你的能量，克服障碍。这是值得的。

Friendly Fellow Daoist
There are only a couple of reviews currently out for this novel, so figured I would add, on the off chance my thoughts make a difference. Suppose I would say that this novel has a tilt towards being humorous.
PW is really a pretty standard novel, I think. But good standard. It incorporates everything I love in these novels - in any book, not simply wuxia, tbh - and this is scope.
I use the term scope in the hopes of describing something epic - not epic as in epic, but epic as in the breadth of the tale, of the story.
The scenes and places, even the people - the powers, dilemmas, feelings - everything increases, repeatedly. The journey - and it IS a journey - is truly an epic one, as with many of the novels on this site.
There is not much to say. If you have read any of the novels on this site, PW is like comfort food - and who doesn''t like mashed potatoes and hamburgers? If you haven''t read much on Wuxiaworld, then this novel is a wonderful, fantastic journey - both into the world of THIS novel, and into the "world" of many other novels on this site.
So I hope you have your appetite ready. Now, begin!

目前只有几篇关于这部小说的评论，所以我想补充一下，我的想法很可能在之后会有所改变。我觉得这部小说很幽默。
我认为《完美世界》是一部非常标准的小说，以好的标准来说。它把我喜欢的一切都包含在这个小说中—包括在任何一本书中，不仅仅是武侠，仙侠—这就是范围。
我用"范围"这个词是想描述一些史诗，不是指史诗本身，而是指故事的广度。
场景和地点，甚至人—力量、困境、感情—一切都在不断增加。这次旅行—它确实是一次旅行—是一次真正的史诗般的旅行，就像这个网站上的许多小说一样。
没什么可说的。如果你读过这个网站上的任何一部小说，《完美世界》就会像安慰食物—谁不喜欢土豆泥和汉堡包呢? 如果你在武侠世界上读得小说不多，那么这部小说就是一次奇妙的旅行—进入这部小说的世界，也将帮助你进入这个网站上其他许多小说的“世界”。
所以我希望你已经准备好了胃口。现在, 开始阅读吧!

hell2the0
Shi Hao is like a holy child... or a devil child if you’re on his bad side. Great story, and when I started reading there were over 1700 chapters, a daunting number, but it kept my attention no problems and now I’m up to date with the novel. Starts with the MC as a baby and love how it doesn’t give his backstory till after the novel is established but it also isn’t one of those novels where the MC is searching for who they are the whole time. MC has a great journey, insane journey. Always trying to rise up and meet an established opponent. Great fight choreography and great dialogue. Must read, kudos to the author.

石昊就像一个天使之子……或者是一个魔鬼之子，如果你站在他的对立面的话。这个故事很棒，当我开始读的时候，它有1700多章，一个令人生畏的数字，但它让我的注意力没有消散，现在我已经跟上小说的更新进度了。从主角还是个婴儿的时候开始，我就很喜欢这部小说，直到小说世界观基本成型后才讲述了他的背景故事，但它也不是那种主角一直在寻找自己是谁的小说。主角有一个伟大的旅程，疯狂的旅程。他总是试图站起来和一个既定的对手见面。里面有很棒的打斗和对话。强烈推荐阅读，向作者致敬。

TheGrandGopher
I wish the review system was more of a star system, because a simple up down can''t capture how I feel about this novel. TLDR; Read it but expect the quality to drop like a rock in the second half.
It has one of the strongest first halves of any novel I''ve read so far, great character introductions, great build up, great cultivation system, great side characters, great goals, everything.
Then somewhere later on in the first half of the novel, it starts to lose steam. Suddenly there''s nothing special about cultivation realms anymore, before each realm had a set of things you had to do, whether carve formations or build heavenly passages or something, along with levels like lower, mid, later, and peak. By the second half these things are no longer important or mentioned, they don''t exist anymore, and the MC just breakthrough to another realm and stays in that realm until he advances into the next one with no realm progression. There''s even an optional realm that''s randomly added into the mix later on(suuuuuper last minute), that in all honesty, didn''t offer the MC any real benefits, it was just a waste of time.

我希望这个评论系统更像是一个星级系统，因为简单的自上而下的排序并不能表达我对这部小说的感受。它读起来太长了，而且在下半部分它的质量会像岩石粉碎般下降。
在我读过的所有小说中，它有着最强的前半部分，很棒的人物介绍，很棒的世界观的建立，很棒的修炼体系，很棒的任务性格，很棒的目标，所有的一切。
然后在小说前半部分的某个地方，它开始失去动力。突然之间，修行领域不再有什么特别之处了，在每个领域都有一系列你必须要做的事情之前，不管是改造自己还是建造天道之类时，境界还有低、中、高的层次。到后半段，这些东西不再重要或被提及，它们不再存在，石昊只是突破到另一个境界，并停留在那个境界，直到他进入下一个境界，而没有了境界中的成长。甚至还有一个可选境界，稍后会随机添加到混合中，老实说，这并没有给主角带来任何实际好处，只是浪费时间。

Then there''s the tropes that I hoped it wouldn''t fall into but then it did. No matter how powerful the MC becomes, everyone always says "wait until you''ve grown up, you''re too weak". When is he "grown up"? Does he have to be the absolute strongest in the word? And no matter how many skills he picks up or how talented he is, people always seem to match him even though they''ve been raised in greenhouses. For example later on they cultivate a form of energy, only few geniuses can cultivate it at all, and it means you''re better than everyone else, and among those who cultivate it, those with the highest grade of this energy are basically rarely heard of legends throughout all time. Then 70 chapters later most young people spoken about have that same level of energy and apparently there was some way to "cheat" and get it. Yet NONE of the people who were trying to cultivate this form of energy ever spoke about it before.
It also falls to the trope of the MC facing off against some adversary that is unrivaled, but then enters some secret realm where there''s as it turns out, a bunch of other unrivaled people just like him who everyone knew about but just never talked about!
And let''s not get started on the secret realms that the MC is always JUST at the perfect realm/age to enter.

然后是我希望它不会落入的俗套，但它确实落入了。不管主角变得多么强大，每个人总是说“等你长大了再说吧，你太弱了”。他什么时候算是“长大了”呢? 他一定要成为世界上最强大的人吗? 无论他掌握了多少功法，无论他多么有才华，人们似乎总是能与他匹敌，即使他们是在温室里长大的。例如，后来他们修炼一种能量，只有少数天才可以修炼它，这意味着你比其他人更好，这种据说是最高等级的能量在之前基本上是很少被人听说的传奇。但在70章之后，大多数年轻人都有了同样的力量，显然是有办法“作弊”得到它的。然而，那些试图修炼这种形式的能量的人以前从来没有谈论过它。
它也落入了这样的俗套: 当主角成为一个无可匹敌的强者时，随后就会进入了一个神秘的领域，结果是，这里还有一群像他一样的无可匹敌的人，每个人都知道他们，只是之前都从来没有提起过!
让我们不要开始谈论秘密的领域，而主角总是正好处于进入领域的完美年龄段。

His goal also become really obscure later on. At the start it''s about a young kid exploring the world, and then about vengeance and finding his family. Later on he just says he wants to get stronger, and help his former teacher, but he doesn''t seem to talk or think about that very much. He just moves from place to place driven by the plot. At the start his ambitions drove the plot, however later on the plot drove his ambitions!
His character also changes greatly. One of the great things about him in the first half was his ruthlessness, and how prudent he was. Many will stay his still ruthless, but it''s all for show. In the first half HE DOES NOT LET HIS ENEMIES ESCAPE, he does anything he can to kill them. But for some reason in the second half it takes him 300 chapters to kill somebody, they just escape over and over and over. And I don''t mean characters that were meant to be fodder, I mean actual threats.
BUT DESPITE ALL THIS, every so often the MC does some stuff that just gets my blood racing, which is why no matter how much I hate on it, I keep reading it, cause it''s captured my heart.

他的目标后来也变得非常模糊。一开始是关于一个小孩探索世界的故事，然后是关于复仇和找到他的家人的故事。后来他只是说他想变得更强大，并帮助他以前的老师，但他似乎不怎么说或想。他只是受情节的驱使，从一个地方搬到另一个地方。一开始他的野心驱动着阴谋，然而后来则是阴谋驱动着他的野心!
他的性格也发生了很大的变化。小说的前半部他最伟大的一点是他的冷酷无情和谨慎。无论面对多少人他都能保持他的冷酷无情，但这都是作秀。在上半场他不会让他的敌人逃跑，他会尽一切可能杀死他们。但出于某种原因，在后半段他花了300个章节去杀一个人，他们只是一次又一次地追逐。我指的不是那些用来当素材的角色，我指的是主角真正的威胁。
但尽管如此，主角偶尔也会做一些让我热血沸腾的事情，这就是为什么不管我有多讨厌它，我还是会继续读它，因为它俘获了我的心。

echizen96
First story/novel that I''ve read in Wuxia. Here you can laugh, cry and feel angry in many scenarios. Here also you learn to love and appreciate all the things the main character have done to his families and friends.
I like how the character grow from being a child to a 1000 year old and how Shi Hao cherish his families. I love how he cares to his old man and to all his companions.
I highly recommend this to all who wants to read it for it is very addicting and a funny novel. Overall this novel is GREAT!!

我读的第一个武侠故事的小说。在这里，你可以在很多情况下笑、哭、生气。在这里，你还可以学会爱和欣赏主角对家人和朋友所做的一切。
我喜欢这个角色从一个孩子到1000岁的成长过程，也喜欢石昊珍惜家庭的方式。我喜欢他对他的长辈和所有同伴的关心。
我向所有想读这本书的人强烈推荐这本书，因为它非常令人上瘾，而且是一本有趣的小说。总的来说，这本小说很棒!!

T1_nightfall
Even if the start feels kinda rough and messy. It is carried by humor and fun. Character is not that overpowered and others can go toe to toe with him. Action scenes are depicted well. Hoping for character fan arts for better visualization. It is a harem, but I hope he will be happy with all of his women but if not, I prefer if it''s not a harem. I hope Shi Hao can change what they will experience and I hope the author will explain how it happened very well. Overall, excellent novel. I enjoy reading from time to time.

即使开始读的时候感觉它的剧情有点粗糙和混乱，但它充满了幽默和乐趣。主角并不是那么强大，别人可以和他面对面较量。动作场面刻画得也很好。希望小说中人物的粉丝能构造出很棒的视觉效果的可视化图像。这是一个种马文，但我希望他和他所有的女人都幸福，如果不能这样，我宁愿它不要开后宫。我希望石昊能够改变他们将要经历的命运，我也希望作者能够很好地解释这一切是如何发生的。总的来说, 这是一部优秀的小说。其实，我偶尔也喜欢读书的。

babji2318
Starts out really good, refreshing new method of cultivation. But that’s it, eventually it turns out to be one of the worst novels of all time. Too many repetitive fights, too many words describing the exact same phenomenon. Too many words describing the beauty of the females in this, it is pathetic. Every time you see a beautiful female you will see a paragraph of text describing how beautiful she is, at some point it gets tiring. Fights also get really tiring at one point with you wondering wtf the Mc is doing since he doesn’t use everything he has at times. Some things are there cuz they were introduced, author will bring them back if he remembers and it’s fucking annoying. Wouldn’t recommend this novel ever, just a word counting author

小说开始时的部分是真正好看，因为它新颖的修炼方法。但即便这样，最终它有可能成为有史以来最糟糕的小说之一。因为它太多重复的争吵，太多描述同一现象的词语。花费了太多的文字描写了小说中女性的美，这实在是可悲的。每次你看到一个漂亮的女性，你会看到一段文字描述她有多漂亮，在某种程度上，这看着很累。战斗场景描述也会变得很累，你会想知道主角在做什么，因为他没有使出全力。有时，有些坑会被填起来，如果作者记得的话，他会把它们带回剧情，这真他妈的烦人。我不会推荐这本小说，这是一个只会文字堆积的作者。

beijingbing
The story has its moments where it is a great story but the problem is that from the blood transformation stage on up everybody has the ability to destroy mountains and forests with a snort from their noise.
The author keeps describing the main character as looking as though he is a God, this is repeated many times in the novel and gets annoying.
Something that also bugs me is how the author portrays the mc as someone who will force himself on others through showing how he keeps threatening Yue Chan with rape. The words are different but when it all comes down to it that is what he means. I just read up to ch 534 which confirmed it for me the mc is a rapist in my view.
Another thing to think about is how the mc becomes super strong with formations but when others use formations they are easily overcome by the mc.

这个故事有它的精彩之处，但问题是，从血液转化阶段开始，每个人都有能力破坏山脉和森林。
作者一直把主人公描写得像神一样，这在小说中重复了很多次，让人厌烦。
还有一件让我不爽的事是，作者通过不断地用强奸威胁月婵，把这位主角描绘成一个喜欢强迫别人的人。用词虽然不同，但归根结底，这就是他的意思。我刚读了534章，在我看来主角像是个强奸犯。
另一件要考虑的事情是为什么主角使用领域时会变得非常强大而当其他人使用领域时他们很容易就被主角打败了。

Kunrin
A novel with a great main character as well as side characters that are cool and stay relevant. What really makes this one special for me is the highly detailed cultivation system and how well detailed the process of cultivation is explained. There is also a sense of mystery that is prent in the novel and solving them little by little along with the MC is one of the main things that keep the novel interesting. The only gripe that I have is that is mostly only has the generic annoying wuxia villains (though they always get their just desserts) otherwise i''d say this certainly a great novel and it deserves more readers.

这部小说有一个伟大的主角，也有很酷很有意义的人物。对我来说，真正让我感到特别的是它非常详细的修炼体系，以及如何详细地解释修炼过程。小说中还有一种普遍存在的神秘感，和主角一起一点一点地揭露它们是使小说保持有趣的主要原因之一。唯一令我不满的是，这部小说里尽是些令人讨厌的反面角色(尽管他们总是会得到报应)，否则我会说，这确实是一部伟大的小说，值得更多的读者去阅读。

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